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Academic Task 1: How people travel to work (bar chart data)

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Task

The table below gives the percentage of workers in one city who used each type of transport to travel to work in 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Transport20002020
Car6244
Bus1821
Train917
Bicycle411
Walking77

Band 7.5 answer

The table shows how the proportion of workers using five modes of transport to reach their jobs in one city changed between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, car use fell substantially, although it remained the most popular option, while train and bicycle commuting both grew markedly. Walking was the only category that did not change.

In 2000, almost two-thirds of workers (62%) drove to work, and no other method accounted for more than 18%. By 2020, however, the car's share had dropped to 44%, a fall of 18 percentage points.

Public transport and cycling gained most of this lost ground. The proportion of people travelling by train nearly doubled, from 9% to 17%, and bus use rose slightly from 18% to 21%. The most striking increase was in cycling, which almost tripled from 4% to 11%. By contrast, the share of workers who walked stayed constant at 7% throughout the period.

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Why this scores 7.5

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
All key features are covered and accurate; figures are well selected with a clear overview.
Coherence and cohesion
Logical grouping: car decline, then growth in alternatives, then the unchanged category.
Lexical resource
Appropriate data language (accounted for, percentage points, lost ground, striking).
Grammatical range and accuracy
Accurate, with varied structures and good control of comparatives.
Task achievement
The overview reports the main trends without data, and the comparisons are accurate.
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