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Writing Task 2: Online shopping (advantages and disadvantages)

Writing Task 2 244 words 1 min read

Task

More and more people are buying goods online instead of in shops. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Band 7.5 answer

Online shopping has grown rapidly over the past decade, and many high streets are struggling as a result. While the trend brings real advantages to consumers, I believe its drawbacks for communities are serious enough that the balance is more even than it first appears.

The advantages are considerable. Customers can compare prices from several sellers in minutes, which saves money and time. People living far from shopping centres, or those with mobility problems, gain access to goods that were previously out of reach. Many online retailers also offer easy returns, which reduces the risk of buying something unsuitable.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages should not be dismissed. As more spending moves online, local shops close, and with them go jobs and the lively streets that give a neighbourhood its character. Delivery services add vans to already crowded roads, and the packaging used for parcels creates considerable waste. Furthermore, online buyers cannot inspect quality before purchase, and the pressure to buy quickly may lead to unplanned spending.

On balance, the benefits to the individual are clear, but the costs to the community are spread across many people and are less visible. Governments can help to redress the balance, for example by encouraging recycled packaging and by supporting local businesses that offer a service online shops cannot, such as advice and repair.

In conclusion, online shopping offers genuine convenience, but it will outweigh its disadvantages only if its effects on local economies and the environment are managed.

Topics:advantages disadvantagesonline shoppinghigh streetband 7.5

Why this scores 7.5

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
A balanced and well-developed response with a nuanced position: advantages recognised, disadvantages weighed, and a conditional conclusion.
Coherence and cohesion
Strong organisation: advantages, disadvantages, then balance. Cohesion through reference and logic.
Lexical resource
Flexible vocabulary (redress the balance, high streets, mobility problems). Natural, precise phrases.
Grammatical range and accuracy
Wide range with accurate complex sentences and good punctuation.
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