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Writing Task 2: Compulsory voting (opinion essay)

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Task

In some countries voting in elections is compulsory. Some people say this is a good idea; others disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Band 8.0 answer

Few civic questions divide opinion as sharply as whether citizens should be required to vote. I largely disagree with compulsory voting: while it raises turnout, it does so at the cost of a principle that matters more than numbers.

Supporters make a respectable case. Where voting is voluntary, turnout is often lowest among young and poorer citizens, so elections can favour those who are already well represented. Compulsion corrects this imbalance, and it encourages parties to address the concerns of the whole population rather than only their most reliable supporters. In countries with compulsory systems, participation usually exceeds ninety per cent.

Nevertheless, a vote that is cast under threat of a fine is not necessarily a considered one. Some people will turn up and choose a name at random, or deliberately spoil their ballot, and the resulting figures give a misleading impression of enthusiasm. More fundamentally, the right to vote implies a right to abstain. Forcing people to take part treats participation as a duty to be enforced, rather than as a freedom that a mature democracy should trust its citizens to use.

There are better ways to widen participation. Making registration automatic, holding elections on a rest day, and improving civic education would remove practical obstacles without removing choice. Several countries that have adopted such measures have seen turnout rise significantly.

In conclusion, although compulsory voting can improve the representativeness of elections, it compromises individual freedom, and the same goal can be reached by removing the barriers that keep people from the polls.

Topics:opinionvotingdemocracyband 8

Why this scores 8.0

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Task response
A clear, qualified position is sustained and every idea is developed. The opposing view is represented fairly before being answered.
Coherence and cohesion
Skilful paragraphing and progression; cohesion arises from the argument itself rather than from linking words.
Lexical resource
Precise and natural (spoil their ballot, representativeness, practical obstacles).
Grammatical range and accuracy
Full range of structures used accurately, including contrast and conditional ideas.
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