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Writing Task 2: Traffic congestion, problems and solutions

Writing Task 2 255 words 1 min read

Task

In many cities, traffic congestion is becoming worse. What problems does this cause, and what measures could be taken to reduce it?

Band 8.0 answer

Anyone who has spent an hour crawling through a city centre knows that congestion is more than an inconvenience. It harms the economy, public health and quality of life, but there are practical steps that governments can take to reduce it.

The first problem is lost time and money. Delivery vans arrive late, workers miss meetings and buses become unreliable, so businesses pass the extra costs on to customers. Second, slow-moving traffic is a major source of air pollution. Residents of busy streets are more likely to develop breathing problems, and children are especially vulnerable. Finally, constant noise and the sheer stress of congestion reduce the appeal of living in a city at all.

The most effective solution is to give people a convincing alternative to driving. Cities that have invested in frequent, affordable trams and metro lines, and in protected cycle lanes, have seen a measurable fall in car use. A second approach is to make driving into the centre more expensive. London's congestion charge, for example, reduced traffic in the zone considerably, and the revenue was used to improve buses. Employers can also help by offering flexible hours so that fewer people travel at the same peak times.

Of course, these measures require investment and political courage, since drivers often oppose charges. Nevertheless, the long-term benefits, in cleaner air, faster journeys and more pleasant streets, justify the effort. In short, congestion causes serious economic, health and social problems, and a combination of better public transport and sensible charges offers the most realistic remedy.

Topics:trafficcityproblem solutiontransport

Why this scores 8.0

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
Both parts of the question are answered fully: three problems, then solutions with an example for each approach.
Coherence and cohesion
Sequencing words (first, second, finally) and a clear problems-then-solutions structure.
Lexical resource
Collocations such as 'crawling through', 'measurable fall' and 'political courage' show range.
Grammatical range and accuracy
Participial phrases, passive voice and concession ('Of course... Nevertheless') used correctly.
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