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Writing Task 2: Cooking at school (Band 6 version)

Writing Task 2 249 words 1 min read

Task

Some people think that children should learn how to cook at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Band 6.0 answer

In my opinion, cooking should be taught in schools because it gives children skills which they will need throughout their lives. However, I do not think it should replace the main academic subjects.

One reason for teaching cooking is health. Nowadays many young people eat too much fast food, and this causes problems such as obesity. If children learn to prepare simple meals, they will be able to eat more healthily when they live alone. Moreover, they may save money, because home cooked food is usually cheaper than eating in restaurants.

Another benefit is that cooking develops practical abilities. In a cooking lesson, children have to follow instructions, measure ingredients and work in a team, and these skills are useful in many jobs too.

On the other hand, school timetables are already very full. Teachers must prepare students for exams in subjects like maths and science, so there may not be enough time for lessons in cooking. In addition, schools need special kitchens and equipment which are expensive.

To solve this problem, schools could offer cooking as an optional subject, or as a short course once a week. In this way, children could learn the basics without losing too much time from other subjects.

In conclusion, I agree that schools should teach cooking, but only as a small part of the curriculum. I believe this balance respects both the need for practical education and the continuing importance of traditional academic study, which prepares students for university and for work.

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Why this scores 6.0

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
A clear position that is sustained, with relevant ideas (health, skills, cost). Some ideas are still stated rather than fully explained.
Coherence and cohesion
Logical order and a range of linkers (Moreover, On the other hand, In this way). Linking is sometimes more obvious than natural.
Lexical resource
Adequate range with some topic vocabulary (obesity, curriculum, ingredients). Some repetition of 'subjects' and 'skills'.
Grammatical range and accuracy
A mix of simple and complex sentences with generally good control. A few slips ('lessons in cooking', missing hyphen in 'home-cooked') do not block meaning.
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