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Writing Task 2: Working from home, advantages and disadvantages

Writing Task 2 250 words 1 min read

Task

More and more people now work from home rather than in an office. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Band 8.0 answer

Remote work, once rare, has become normal for millions of employees. Although it brings some genuine drawbacks, I believe that its advantages, particularly for employees and the environment, outweigh them.

The most obvious benefit is time. A worker who no longer commutes can save an hour or more every day, which can be spent sleeping, exercising or with family. This tends to improve wellbeing, and many employers report that staff who work from home are more focused because they are interrupted less often. There is also a financial gain, since people spend less on fares, fuel and lunches. For the wider community, fewer journeys mean less traffic and lower emissions, which is a benefit for everyone, including those who must still travel.

On the other hand, working from home is not suitable for every person or every task. Some employees find that without colleagues around they feel isolated, and the boundary between work and leisure can disappear, leading them to answer messages late into the evening. Younger staff may also miss the informal learning that comes from watching experienced colleagues at work, which is hard to reproduce on a video call.

These problems, however, can be reduced. Companies can ask staff to come to the office for a few days each month, set clear hours for replying to messages and arrange regular social contact online. Because the main benefits, saved time and reduced travel, are permanent, whereas the disadvantages can be managed, I conclude that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Why this scores 8.0

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
Answers the exact question asked ('do the advantages outweigh...') with a clear verdict and supports it with weighed arguments.
Coherence and cohesion
Advantages, then disadvantages, then a paragraph that resolves the tension. 'On the other hand' and 'however' mark the turns.
Lexical resource
Flexible paraphrase (remote work, work from home, work remotely) avoids repetition.
Grammatical range and accuracy
Conditional, relative and 'because ... whereas ...' structures are used accurately.
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