Skip to content
Toofey.
← All strong samples
7.5
Band 7.5Strong

Speaking Part 2: A holiday place (Band 7.5 version)

Speaking Part 2 201 words 1 min read

Question

Describe a place you visited on holiday. You should say: where it was, who you went with, what you did there, and explain why you remember it.

What a band 7.5 answer sounds like

The place I'd like to describe is Da Nang, a coastal city in central Vietnam that I visited last summer with my parents and my younger brother.

We based ourselves in a modest hotel a few minutes from the beach, and the days fell into a pleasant rhythm: swimming in the morning, a long seafood lunch, and then wandering around the markets when it got cooler. One day we took a cable car up to the Golden Bridge, a walkway that appears to be held up by two enormous stone hands. It was packed with tourists, which rather spoiled it, but the view across the mountains more than made up for the crowds.

What makes the trip stand out, though, is less the sights than the company. My father works punishing hours, and I can't remember the last time I saw him properly switch off. Watching him doze on the beach with a newspaper over his face, I realised how rarely we'd all been in one place with nothing to do.

So, in a way, it was a holiday that reminded me what a holiday is for, and I'd happily go back, preferably in spring, when it isn't quite so scorching.

Topics:holidayplaceband 7.5part 2

Why this scores 7.5

One note for each marking criterion.

Fluency and coherence
Speaks fluently and coherently, with a clear arc (what, what we did, why it matters). Reflection ('what makes the trip stand out') answers the last prompt in depth.
Lexical resource
Flexible, idiomatic language used naturally (fell into a rhythm, more than made up for, punishing hours, switch off).
Grammatical range and accuracy
Wide range of structures (participle phrases, relative clauses, cleft sentence) used accurately.
Pronunciation
Not assessable from text. Practise stress and linking so the longer sentences stay easy to follow.
Note
A teaching sample written by AI to show what this band looks like. Errors in the lower versions are deliberate. Not examiner-marked.

Try it yourself

Write or record your own answer and get a band estimate with notes on every criterion.

Get feedback on your own answer

Climb to Expert

Natural, precise and fully developed. Errors are rare and slight.

See band 8–9 samples

More Speaking Part 2 samples