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Writing Task 2: Why people volunteer (two-part question)

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Task

In some countries, a growing number of people spend time doing unpaid work to help others. Why do you think people do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Band 7.0 answer

Volunteering is becoming increasingly common, from working in food banks to coaching local sports teams. In my view, people volunteer for a mixture of personal and social reasons, and the trend is overwhelmingly positive.

One reason is the satisfaction of helping others. Many volunteers say that giving their time makes them feel useful and connected to their community, particularly retired people or those who live alone. A second reason is practical: unpaid work can provide experience and skills. Young people, for instance, often volunteer to improve their prospects of finding a paid job, and unemployed adults use it to stay active and meet people. Finally, some people volunteer because of strong beliefs, such as concern for the environment or a desire to repay help they once received.

This development has clear benefits. Volunteers provide services that public budgets or charities could not afford, from visiting the elderly to cleaning rivers. At the same time, they strengthen social ties, because people who meet through shared tasks are less likely to feel isolated. For the volunteers themselves, evidence from several studies suggests improvements in wellbeing.

There are small risks. If governments rely too heavily on volunteers, they might reduce funding for essential services, and not all tasks are suitable for untrained helpers. However, these concerns can be managed through clear rules and by treating volunteers as a supplement to professional services rather than a replacement.

In conclusion, people volunteer to feel useful, to gain skills and to act on their values, and the trend is a positive one provided that it supplements, rather than replaces, public provision.

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Why this scores 7.0

One note for each marking criterion.

Task response
Both questions are answered fully; the position is clear and the minor risks are acknowledged and answered.
Coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph has a clear function. Good sequencing: reasons, benefits, risks, conclusion.
Lexical resource
Wide enough range with appropriate collocations (strengthen social ties, supplement rather than replace).
Grammatical range and accuracy
Frequent error-free complex sentences. Minor imprecision.
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